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Post by Lady Elwen on Feb 21, 2005 0:33:13 GMT -5
Author's Name: The One and Only Skande Email: Skande@myway.comSubmission Title: Turn Back TIme Please leave reviews for Turn Back Time in this thread. ~ Elwen
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Elbereth
Ranger
~The light of Il?vatar lives still in her face.~
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Post by Elbereth on Mar 24, 2005 1:13:37 GMT -5
Skande, this is a really sweet poem; as a horse person, I can understand the feelings behind that loss, and it's really nice to see another person commending the horse the way you have.
I find it interesting that within the body of the actual poem, you don't mention directly that you are talking about a horse. I suppose it could pass for a human death, as well, especially with the "pour out all my pride and love of what you are and you've become" line, if that's even the correct notation... Sorry...
It fits really nicely, and the imagery in this is really catching!
~ Elbereth
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